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December 30, 2012
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Just been playing around with my new present and I bought Sketchbook Pro and I have been loving it :)

Just a boy/ teenager who has found an old space ship which has alerted the wrist beacon that he owns.

And this will be my last picture for 2012 but I will see you all in 2013 with lots of improvements and new drawings.

Critique requested

Critiques are super useful for helping me (amd others) to improve, so if you do it will be much appreciated! Thanks :)
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*Comical1 Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is really remarkable! you have a lot of talent!
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~Eliket Jan 15, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you so much for your kind words :hug: :)
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~SenCity Dec 30, 2012  Student General Artist
Looking very good, but I think if you were to improve it you could start with establishing the depth more.
Those trees in the foreground look like they're part of a mudslide on the ground until it overlaps the vines on the right.

Because the foreground are the darkest parts of the image, it was the first thing I noticed and distracted me from the focus of the scene. Maybe if you swap the saturation of the background and foreground trees it could help change that.
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~Eliket Jan 2, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you for critiquing! :) Yeah I see what you mean, I think the focus isn't clear enough :) I appreciate the comment, thanks! :D
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